Monday, 13 October 2014

Essay Feedback

Essay Feedback

In order to improve my essay for future defence i will take on board the criticism from my previous essay and do the following:


  1. I structure me essay in essay form rather than in note form.
  2. I apply media theory with analysis and use it to develop an argument.
  3. To ensure to have a detailed conclusion is detailed and links the points I have made.
  4. To apply social, historical and political knowledge that clearly link to the question.
  5. Extensive research. 

For my next essay I would like to secure a solid level 3. In order to achieve this I will need to accomplish the necessity above as well make sure to improve spelling, grammar, punctuation, terminology and making sure that when reading it is fluent.  

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